follow up email.. CAn some1 help me out please? I had an interview with Siemens. I need to write a short adn simple follow up email.. since that manager I talked to has been out of town for 2 weeks and now I want to reach him by email basically asking him what the situation is.. information should include:I interviewed for ___ position on __ date and I was basically wondering what the status was? I need help framing this into something professional.. plz help.

Dear ____: I was interviewed for ____ position on ____date. I would like to thank you and Siemens for this opportunity. Can you apprise me of any further steps I should take to further my application or addition information which I could supply? Also, could you apprise me in general of the status of my application? With thanks I am,Very sincerely yours,

I interviewed for the xxx position on xxx. I was impressed with the enthusiasm and professionalism that I encountered during the interview process. My main workplace motivation has always been to find an environment that supports innovation and individuality within an overall team concept..I sincerely hope that you agree that we are a good employment match. Did you find attributes in me that would convince you that I can be part of the Siemens team?